Why You Need a Developmental Editor

I’m not much of a dancer, but once, in the arms of a ballroom instructor, I felt like I could be. In his arms, I moved with a grace I never thought possible. When the song ended and I moved on to a different partner, my clumsiness returned. As authors, we may imagine ourselves dancing the tango alone in front of an adoring audience. But it takes two to tango. Your reader is on the stage with you.

So how do you know if your story will glide your reader across the floor—or cause them to stumble?

You probably can’t.

I know I can’t with my own writing. I hear the rhythm of my story so clearly that I don’t always notice when I’ve misstepped. This is where a developmental editor comes in. A developmental editor evaluates your writing to ensure every step guides the reader to move in tandem with the story.

How it works:

We make sure the performance takes place on the stage.

We look at the big picture—structure, pacing, and focus—to ensure the story is grounded and cohesive, not wandering into scenes or ideas that don’t serve the whole.

We make sure the choreography makes sense.

We examine how scenes and ideas connect, making sure each step flows logically so the reader isn’t confused or forced to guess what’s happening.

We maximize body contact.

We strengthen the emotional connection between the reader and the story—deepening character, tension, and stakes so the reader stays fully engaged.

We make sure the book does the leading.

We ensure the writing guides the reader clearly and confidently, so they’re carried through the story without resistance or uncertainty.

If your story feels a little off balance, you don’t have to figure out the steps alone. The right partner can help you find the rhythm again. When you’re ready, I’d be glad to step onto the floor with you.

You can contact me at raganfrywrites@gmail.com